It doesn't look all that bad to me.
It does take a few pours to get the mold hot. The first few are almost always a bit messed up (wrinkles, incomplete fills, voids). Once the mold gets hot they will look a lot better.
Also, don't look for the same surface finish on a cannon ball as on a 30 caliber bullet. It just isn't going to happen, nor does it likely matter. Also, keep in mind that you arn't running them thru a sizing die to make the outsides nice and shiney. A bit of surface frosting on a cannon ball is no big deal.
Weight the finished batch and look for statistically lightweight fliers that probably have voids inside.
I started painting mine blue. I did this for 2 reasons. Firstly, once painted your hands arn't contacting lead any more. Secondly, blue is easier to spot when you go looking for them. The reason for this is that is is pretty rare in nature to find anything on the ground that is blue, so if it is blue it is probably your cannon ball, or one of my missing tools (I paint just about everything blue).
Once painted, any surface frosting is invisible, and minor wrinkles don't seem to be as obvious
Rick